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glauce (glauce@moneybutton.com)

1 year ago

In a battle of wills Fight for freedom not control Free to be heart-whole

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1 year ago

rlcreate

1 year ago

Good haiku, it's got one syllable too many on the first line but nice and poetic overall!

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glauce tipped:

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1 year ago

glauce replied:

Oh yes, I see... thank you@ricreate... ah, maybe just remove the "a", the meaning changes ever so slightly... (plus add missing comma, haha) In battle of wills Fight for freedom, not control Free to be heart-whole Other option is to use plural, "battles"... but somehow doesn't ring right, interesting challenge

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glauce replied:

You are a wonderful teacher!

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rlcreate replied:

Thanks@glauce 🙂, maybe keep the 'a' but get rid of the 'in' - A battle of wills Fight for freedom, not control Free to be heart-whole I think that would work 👍

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glauce replied:

Aha... sounds so much better, more poetical, thank you!!!... You are guiding us gently, but with purpose... of course, we are painting a picture with words, not explaining the content... I love it!

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rlcreate replied:

Thanks, I'm happy you're enjoying it so much 🙂

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glauce

1 year ago

Haiku to celebrate Bitcoin Independence Day - 15 November

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miggy tipped:

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1 year ago

glauce replied:

Thank you@miggy

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