Oh yes, I see... thank you@ricreate... ah, maybe just remove the "a", the meaning changes ever so slightly... (plus add missing comma, haha)
In battle of wills
Fight for freedom, not control
Free to be heart-whole
Other option is to use plural, "battles"... but somehow doesn't ring right, interesting challenge
Thanks@glauce 🙂, maybe keep the 'a' but get rid of the 'in' -
A battle of wills
Fight for freedom, not control
Free to be heart-whole
I think that would work 👍
Aha... sounds so much better, more poetical, thank you!!!... You are guiding us gently, but with purpose... of course, we are painting a picture with words, not explaining the content... I love it!